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1Unsolved Mystery Empty Unsolved Mystery Sun 10 Apr 2011, 8:15 pm

Princess

Princess
 
 
Chapter 1




There was a time in the universe when all was at peace. It was also a time when a great Evil ruled it's own universe, but as always the Evil wanted more power. But this story is about two unlikely heroes who save the universe from utter destruction. These two heroes were brothers who always fought over power, but little did they know that they were going to have to band together to save not only their family but the universe as well.The oldest brother Gideon was the more responsible brother who wanted the best for his brother Loki. Gideon didn't want to fight Loki, but he knew if he didn't fight then his brother would be able to over power him. Their father Odin was very impressed with his sons' ability to fight. He was most impressed with Gideon, and his strategies in fighting. Before long Gideon had finished his training and received his father's blessing to go out into the universe and help anyone he could but to never go past the boundaries of this universe.
Gideon agreed to his father's wishes and never went past the boundaries of his universe. Little did he know that his brother was jealous at his brother for receiving their father's blessing. Loki planned for revenge. Loki decided to kill Odin and take the throne but Gideon had other plans for his brother. He stopped Loki and Loki was banished from the universe he had once called home. Loki traveled for months until he came to the edge of Evil's own universe, Loki was welcomed as one of Evil's own resident. Loki once the son of Odin was now evil.
As Odin grew older so did Gideon. Gideon was becoming a fine young man but he was also becoming very arrogant. Even though his father warned him that he was heading down the same path as his brother Gideon refused to listen. Odin thought it best for his son to choose his own path.




TO BE CONTINUED.........



Last edited by Princess on Wed 10 Aug 2011, 9:54 pm; edited 6 times in total

2Unsolved Mystery Empty Re: Unsolved Mystery Mon 11 Apr 2011, 3:54 am

Mimi

Mimi
 
 
Good beginning

3Unsolved Mystery Empty Re: Unsolved Mystery Mon 11 Apr 2011, 8:26 am

Owlstar

Owlstar
 
 
Nice first chapter. A good start!

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4Unsolved Mystery Empty Re: Unsolved Mystery Mon 11 Apr 2011, 6:51 pm

Princess

Princess
 
 
More posted! Very Happy

5Unsolved Mystery Empty Re: Unsolved Mystery Mon 11 Apr 2011, 7:00 pm

hoodedwarbler12

hoodedwarbler12
 
 
Oh, is this about Norse gods?

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6Unsolved Mystery Empty Re: Unsolved Mystery Mon 11 Apr 2011, 7:27 pm

Princess

Princess
 
 
Not exactly.....its a mix between Norse gods and something else I can't remember.

7Unsolved Mystery Empty Re: Unsolved Mystery Tue 12 Apr 2011, 9:23 pm

Owlstar

Owlstar
 
 
Very good!

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8Unsolved Mystery Empty Re: Unsolved Mystery Thu 14 Apr 2011, 8:53 pm

Princess

Princess
 
 
More posted! Very Happy

9Unsolved Mystery Empty Re: Unsolved Mystery Sat 16 Apr 2011, 3:36 am

Mimi

Mimi
 
 
Now its getting interesting.

10Unsolved Mystery Empty Re: Unsolved Mystery Sat 04 Jun 2011, 4:32 pm

Princess

Princess
 
 
more posted!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Very Happy Unsolved Mystery 43962

11Unsolved Mystery Empty Re: Unsolved Mystery Sat 04 Jun 2011, 4:50 pm

Rainbow Zebra

Rainbow Zebra
 
 
I love the creativity of the first chapter... I would love to read more, keep up the excellent work, Princess!

12Unsolved Mystery Empty Re: Unsolved Mystery Sat 04 Jun 2011, 9:34 pm

DogLUVR

DogLUVR
 
 
Great story so far Princess!

13Unsolved Mystery Empty Re: Unsolved Mystery Sun 05 Jun 2011, 1:56 am

Mimi

Mimi
 
 
I know you have more in you....keep up the good work.

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